Moriah Leila

Please let me know what you think of the flow of the piece, character development, am I doing too much telling and not enough showing? Is it entertaining, or are ...

I'm not one hundred percent sold on my title, but I felt it was an improvement from "Untitled". Let me know what you think. In this piece I'd like for ...

This piece is so short I don't think I will make it a chapter, I will probably just add it to the end of Chapter Two. Thank you for reading, ...

The writing juices have really been flowing, so I've been writing a ton. This is just the first of many installments to follow soon hereafter. Again, as always please rip ...

Like I said, I was on a roll and I am just so excited to get some feedback on this story. I appreciate everyone's input and don't feel shy about ...

The party was at Bridget Summer’s house. It was a big ranch-style home, situated on the outskirts of town. Her closest neighbor was nearly a mile away. When they arrived, ...

This one is kind of short. So I'd really like to focus on the flow, entertainment value, and if you connect with my protagonist. Also, I'd liek to know if ...

Veronica pressed a graham cracker crust mixture into the bottom of a pan and popped it into the oven. She turned to face the kitchen and was surprised by how ...